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A song's point of view is simply one aspect of the whole lyric. Anonymity can make us forget that there is a person at fforums other end of our critique.

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Scott, I hope you don't mind, but your ideas inspired me and I thought I'd include a bit of my process for Mick in case it's useful for him. 37, Lyrics request.

All the best. When a listener hears such imagery, it's easy for him or her gorums picture the images mentally and thus the listener becomes involved in the song. It's a sort of "show and then tell". Where do these words come from? Imagine, if you can, that you are speaking to the writer face to face.

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She was shrouded in sunshine A silhouette in the doorway It was like the church was filled with heaven Music danced all around her She floated down the aisle And on her cheeks, I could see happiness glisten Pretty lady in white Today is the day of your life Pretty lady in white Try reading the above two versions aloud, complete with chorus, and see which words work best for imagery.

Who sings it? Forum; Share poetry and lyrics. Here's an example to explain what I mean I also thought I'd try the present tense and make the tone more conversational by adding some contractions e. As part of my writing process, I also test run the lyrics with all points of view.

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That being said, though, my journey to date has been one of the most satisfying experiences I've known. This section is specifically for song lyrics.

In other words, these images allow a listener to foeums the lyrics with his or her own experiences. You are absolutely correct. Identify it.

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Hi Scott, Quote: I also don't believe it's down to simply what 'person' the narrative comes from. His diagram addresses intimacy only. I thought I'd try consonance rhyme and see what happens. She stood in the doorway Waiting for the music to start Everyone could see she was happy The organ played and, after a pause, She walked down the aisle Up ahead of her, stood the man that she fancied.

As an example, here's the second set of lyrics in "second person narrative" you, he, she, etc. Let's work it out Title? Hang in there and practice! You're shrouded in sunshine A silhouette in the doorway It's like the church is filled with heaven Music dances around you You float down the lyrci And on your cheeks, he sees happiness glisten Pretty lady in white Today is the day of your life Pretty lady in white I hope that I'm not sounding preachy writing all this, as I said at the start, it's just that I thought it might be useful to see how I go about doing things.

To my mind, the most important aspect of a lyric is to create something that a listener can resonate with.

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Images, by themselves, do not usually create meaning, though. The Artist's Cafe is happy to read the lyrics for completed songs. Learning to write lyrics has not been easy for me and I've still got a long climb ahead of me on that lyric mountain! In a mainly telling fashion, it could be something like I've written the second example above in "first person narrative" I, she, he, etc. If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above.

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To capitalize on such imagery, it's necessary to follow it with lines that add a sense of feelings, depth and meaning to the images. One way to accomplish involving the listener in a song is by using imagery based on the senses of seeing, hearing, listening, tasting, smelling, as well as images based on body movements and feelings e.

A place for members foruks post their lyrics without music if they're looking for constructive fprums.

I'm not putting the above lyrics out there as a finished product, they're simply on the road to going somewhere. Critiquing a Lyric: 1 Strive to be courteous and respectful in your critiques, keeping in mind that we all come to this forum with different perspectives, genre preferences and levels of experience. Pretty lady in white Today is the day of your life Pretty lady in white As a first draft for me, a lyric like the above is more about setting a road-map for what might become a song.

If you see areas you think could be improved, explain why you believe they need improvement. Make an attempt to say why you think it does.

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Mick, the following is for you if you're interested Let's say I'm writing a lyric about a woman walking down the aisle to get married. SONGS. Rules for Posting a Lyric: 1 Please critique 2 or more lyrics for every lyric you post.